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The Wrath of Nega-Rachel Sneak Peek 1

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            On a pirate ship, Rachel, Eddie, Agamya-Michiko, Bruce, Jennifer, David, and Jaret are all dressed in pirate attire and are battling Captain Steelteeth and his crew.
            Jennifer confronts one of the pirates, draws a sword and said, “Villains, hope you've brought your tickets! Because you’re about to see Heroes Live!”
            Bruce said, “Okay........ what the heck was that?!”
            Jennifer said to him, “What, don't heroes talk like this?”
            Bruce said, “Um, no.”

            On top of the stern deck, Rachel was sword fighting with Captain Steelteeth, who is famous for his steel teeth. He said, “Hahahahaha, you know for a little lassie at your age, you seemed to be great with a sword!”
            Rachel said, “Well, I kind of learned it from my mom a while ago.”
            Steelteeth said, "Really? Well, my mother wasn't really much of a sword fighter, she would always tell me to clean up my room, do the dishes, and reminded me to put on some ointment for my rash."
            Rachel said, "Wow..............I don't know what to say about that.
            But suddenly he knocks her sword away and gets thrown out. The music begins to swell up in suspense as Captain Steelteeth said, “Haha, you’ve been outmatched, lassie, and it’s really fitting when the music from my orchestra was playing, right boys?”
            The conductor nods his head and the orchestra resumes. Then Rachel smirked and said, “You know, Captain, there’s one other thing that you haven’t taken away…” She then reaches for her backpack and pulls out her ray gun. She shoots out a laser at Steelteeth’s sword and knocks it out of his hand.
            She gets up and points it at him and said “Now we’re even.”
            Humiliated by a girl with her ray gun, Captain Steelteeth said to the crew, “Men, hold down your positions...and surrender.”
            The crew put down their weapons and surrendered. Then the ship stops on the land. Rachel said to Captain Steelteeth, “Thanks for taking us to the island with the treasure, Captain.”
            He replied, “Well, you’re welcome, Rachel, if you come across the treasure, there’s a bottle of ointment for my rash and if you find it, Polly will retrieve it for me.”
            Then Polly squawk, “Squawk, Find me Steelteeth’s ointment, squawk.”
            Jennifer then looks grossed out, saying, “Can I be the first to say ‘eewwww’”
So, while I'm still busy with the next Rachel and Friends episode, The Wrath of Nega-Rachel, here's a sneak peek.

For the voice of Captain Steelteeth, I think the perfect voice for him would be..........Nick Offerman, who played another pirate in another movie that came out the exact same year. Okay, he played Metalbeard from The LEGO Movie.

Anyway, I hope you guys will like it.

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