Written by Joseph Monasky
Sung by Rachel 'Ray Gun' Flynn and her friends.
Rachel:
With every 104 days of Summer Vacation
Having the best fun is all I really care
But the most important thing than my Imagination
Is finding the right people to really Share
I always wanted to find the best of friends
Who'll share with me their own odds and ends
Agamya-Michiko:
With my scientific brain
Bruce:
With my cartooning versatality
Jennifer:
With my acting and my brother's violin-playing to really entertain
David:
Showoff
Jaret:
With my awesome songwriting ability
Eddie:
And a little brother to comfort you when you're in pain
Rachel and Friends:
Together we can....
Fighting off cybees, battling epic monsters
Exploring a forest of Tree-like flowers
Discovering some form of any lost world
Or Searching a mysterious source of power
Looking for adventure, seeking awesome thrills,
Or giving out lots of chuckles
Seeking out danger, helping out people and creatures
Or just staying out of trouble
Isabella: Rachel!
Rachel 'Ray Gun' Flynn: Is this theme song too familiar?
Phineas: Yes, Yes it is.
Rachel:
This summer is going to be very epic and it is true
Because I know how to spend it with friends like you
UPDATE:
I like how you gave everyone solos about their talents and character. Also, now it sounds like a P&F-related theme song, but isn't actually ripping Phineas and Ferb off.
They're all in character, too. Good job on the update.
But I also feel like it's missing...something. All this stuff in the theme song is somewhat related to Rachel, but not her friends.
I see nothing about songwriting, music, arts, cartooning...the stuff Jaret, David, Jennifer or Bruce are said to like. Of course the song would relate to Ray Gun's imagination and adventures, but a big thing in her character is her friends, and I think there should be at least one verse that references their interests too.
Here's another thing: It's a theme song about about Rachel's imagination, her adventures and her friends, right?
But around the part where it mentions giant bubbles, it goes back and forth from danger to something that would be more related to Phineas and Ferb.
I'm not sure what you should do, but you should keep as a theme song for what Rachel likes best: Imagination and friends, not make her sound like some sort of super hero.
It's an overall good and original song.
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