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Written by Joseph Monasky

Sung by Rachel Flynn and her friends.

Rachel:
With every 104 days of Summer Vacation
Having the best fun is all I really care
But the most important thing than my Imagination
Is finding the right people to really Share

I always wanted to find the best of friends
Who'll share with me their own odds and ends

Agamya-Michiko:
With my scientific brain

Bruce:
With my cartooning versatality

Jennifer:
With my acting and my brother's violin-playing to really entertain

David (annoyed):
Showoff

Jaret:
With my awesome songwriting ability

Eddie:
And a little brother to comfort you when you're in pain

Rachel and Friends:

Together we can....

Fighting off cybees, battling epic monsters
Exploring a forest of Tree-like flowers

Discovering some form of any lost world
Or Searching a mysterious source of power

Looking for adventure, seeking awesome thrills,
Or giving out lots of chuckles

Seeking out danger, helping out people and creatures
Or just staying out of trouble


Isabella: Rachel!
Rachel: Is this theme song too familiar?
Phineas: Yes, Yes it is.

Rachel:
This summer is going to be very epic and it is true
Because I know how to spend it with friends like you
Well, here it is. The Theme Song I wrote for the entire Ray Gun stories.

While the theme may reminiscent with Today's Gonna be a Great Day but I listened to The My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic theme song: youtu.be/pBcqNiECUFs to make it different. Remember, alongside Summer Vacation, the themes are imagination and friendship. I really love the joke about Ray Gun wondering if her theme song is too familiar to her father and Uncle Ferb's theme song and Phineas relpied "Yes, Yes It Is."

I hope you guys like it. Maybe, next time, Ernie will have his own theme song :D

If there's someone who would sing it, I was thinking about Grace Potter and Cheap Trick singing it.

Critique it if you like.

Edit 1: Added in Her friends for verses based on their interests.

Phineas and Ferb (c) Dan Povenmire & Jeff 'Swampy' Marsh & Disney

Rachel Flynn and Theme Song (c) :iconredjoey1992:
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Critique by Cookie3Death3Cap Dec 24, 2012, 5:42:09 AM
Well, I think it's a good song with some reference to the show, but has it's own unique qualities (I liked the reference to the show's theme song XD)

UPDATE:
I like how you gave everyone solos about their talents and character. Also, now it sounds like a P&F-related theme song, but isn't actually ripping Phineas and Ferb off.

They're all in character, too. Good job on the update.


But I also feel like it's missing...something. All this stuff in the theme song is somewhat related to Rachel, but not her friends.

I see nothing about songwriting, music, arts, cartooning...the stuff Jaret, David, Jennifer or Bruce are said to like. Of course the song would relate to Ray Gun's imagination and adventures, but a big thing in her character is her friends, and I think there should be at least one verse that references their interests too.

Here's another thing: It's a theme song about about Rachel's imagination, her adventures and her friends, right?
But around the part where it mentions giant bubbles, it goes back and forth from danger to something that would be more related to Phineas and Ferb.

I'm not sure what you should do, but you should keep as a theme song for what Rachel likes best: Imagination and friends, not make her sound like some sort of super hero.



It's an overall good and original song.
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Juu-G Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow very interesting song.
I want to sing it XD
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RedJoey1992 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you.
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yuseizinski Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Terrific! It fits Rachel.
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RedJoey1992 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you :D
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Skullgal94 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Wow, pretty cool:)
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RedJoey1992 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you.
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Skullgal94 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Welcome:)
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RedJoey1992 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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Skullgal94 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
:D
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RocketSonic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice :)

Sorry I wasn't helping you through the notes, I had to do a few favors for my brother.
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